1) Here is my third pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtHH-F-sSdk&feature=youtu.be
2) What stood out as important was a comment about trying to create a viable competitive model. I set out to look for changes or additions that I could make to create more revenue or a more appealing product. The addition that I made was adding the ability to stream live events.
3) I didn't change this based on feedback, but more based on what I have been thinking about my venture lately. I wanted to figure out more ways that my venture could make more revenue. I came up with the idea of adding live events. If individuals don't have a channel that they want to watch one night for a live event, they can stream that live event on that channel for a fee. This allows customers to choose an event they want to watch one night, rather than being locked into a channel for the rest of the month.
I actually think you commented on my elevator pitch in the past and you gave some great advice, so I’m glad to see you got some good feedback as well. And I think it’s great that you changed some things on your own, separate from the feedback your peers give you. Your speech was really good, and the changes really helped. Great job
ReplyDeleteI like that you were creative in the idea of how you could capitalize on your streaming service by partnering with other apps to create more users/subscribers and thus more revenue. I think that your body language could be more enthusiastic, such as expressing a little of your points with your hands. A little hand gesture could go a long ways. Other than that, great pitch
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your continued improvement on your venture concept. It's a great add to include live events. Would this include sporting events like UFC fights that are currently pay-per-view? Your confidence shines during your speech that that's great!
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